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Blue birds where have you gone?
With you went the reminder of his life
Now only a leafless tree remains
A barren shadow, without a melody. 
A mere outline of what once was
Changes you will never see
hopes lost, visions unfulfilled
Time and all it held for you...gone!
The minute you decided
for it all to come to an end.
How is this sort of resolution made?
What conclusion does one come to
that existence must cease so completely?
A mind must break beyond all repair
to overlook those who are shattered by such a loss.
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Adam Wright More than 1 year ago
I've had it in my mind lately to do away with myself and I would wonder just how big of a deal it would be.... this gets to me a little... good job...
Weston Roberts More than 1 year ago
I enjoyed the meaningfulness found in what ceases to be.
Ana Pelayo More than 1 year ago
The poet is telling us about a loss.
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